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文中高级词汇不足；句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
As a remark saying:"The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it". We all know Mao Zedong, the first president of China, who spent his whole life for China. At present, we all still know well him. So it is meaningful to spend your life for worthy. For me, firstly, learning is meaningful. When i was a baby, i started to learn working and saying. And when i was older, i learned how to write. To be honest, i will kepp leaning until i go die. Secondly, i will spend my life to help other people. Though my power is so little, i can use it give others light. For example, i can take rubbish on the road into rubbish bin.
