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文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文中高级词汇不足；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
As a remark saying:"The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it". We all know Mao Zedong, the first president of China, who spent his whole life for China. At present, we all still know well him. So it is meaningful to spend your life for worthy. For me, firstly, learning is meaningful. When i was a baby, i started to learn working and saying. And when I was older, I learned how to write. To be honest, i will kepp leaning until I go die. Secondly, I will spend my life to help other people. Though my power is so little, I can use it give others light. For example, I can take rubbish on the road into rubbish bin. I can help old people through road and so on. Thirdly, I can save resourse.
