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2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:33浏览次数:2052
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题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?

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1.对这种做法有人表示支持
2.有人并不赞成
3.我认为…
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Nowadays, more and more people take their children to join the classes of extended school prorams which they assert that children should be cultivated many abilities of living and studying. Some people think that they send their kids to arts classes is right. Because they figure out that which make the kids learn more lessons is good for themselves. They also assert that participate the art classes can cultivate the sense of beauty and would gather another ability of living, which can improve the level of living and decrease the pressure of earning. But on the contrary, the other people don't think about so. The other people regard that it will take much pressure on their kids which makes them upset and dissappointed. What's more, it will damage the kids' confidence. And it will bring more homework to add in their study. From my own perspective, the parents shouldn't send their kids to arts classes. We should give more space to let the children live alone and independent which it can built up thier confidence for solving the problems well. Last but not least, studying freely can decrease their pressure and make them feel more comfortable about their learning.

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