2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；作者词汇基础不错，注意极个别的拼写错误；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

Nowadays,with the development of internet, computer are become a unique member in our daily life.Therefore.people become more and more rely on the computer.It is good for us?Or bad? Every coins have both sides,also the computer is.On the one hand,people can get the information in computers without going out.They also can reading newpapers、magazines and other books on the internet,it's good for the envornment because which cut down the papers using.On the other hand,people's touch become more and more close.However,people were easy addicted to the computer,they will drive their whole life to play the computer.What's more,the vires in the computer are easy to let sciret out. As far as i'm concerned,computer can get along well with man,and make man's life more colorful if use computers in the right ways.