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2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:33浏览次数:2050
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题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?

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1.对这种做法有人表示支持
2.有人并不赞成
3.我认为…
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Nowadays, more and more people take their children to join the classes of extended school programs which they regard that children should be cultivated many abilities of living and studying. Some people think that they send their kids to arts classes are right. Because they had figured out a fact that which making the kids learn more lessons is good for themselves. They also assert that joining the art classes can cultivate the sense of beauty and would gather another ability, which can improve the standard of living and decrease the pressure of earning. But on the contrary, the other people don't think about so. The other people regard that it will take much pressure on their kids while made them upset and disappointed. What's more, it will damage the kids' confidence. And it will bring more homework to add in their study. From my own perspective, the parents shouldn't send their kids to arts classes. We should give more space to let the children live lonely and independent which it can built up their confidence for solving the problems well. Last but not least, studying freely can decrease their pressure and make them feel more comfortable about their learning.

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