小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句式多变，多多练习从句的使用；文中词汇丰富度不足，拼写检查也要重视。

I have a friend , she is beatiful . she has long hair and blank eyes , she like read book and playing game. we have meet so many years . we study in same school , we are both like TFboys , we have so many story .last day, we tolk about tv show , she like listen to music ,but i want to see a movie ,so we are angry with each other .