语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中词汇表达不够丰富,高级词汇方面要多累积;句式多变,多多练习从句的使用。
I have a friend , she is beautiful . she has long hair and blank eyes , she like read book and playing game. we have meet so many years . we study in same school , we are both like TFboys , we have so many story .last day, we tolk about tv show , she like listen to music ,but i want to see a movie ,so we are angry with each other .