文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;文中词汇表达不够丰富,高级词汇方面要多累积;部分长句用的不错,但从句比例偏少。
I have a friend and she is beautiful. She has long hair and blank eyes , she likes reading book and playing game . We have meet so many years . we study in same school , we are both like TFboys , we have so many story .last day, we tolk about tv show , she like listen to music ,but i want to see a movie ,so we are angry with each other .