2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

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In accordance with what is detailedly demonstrated in the above pie-chart,we can observe distinctly that vast changes have taken place as regards the employment of university graduates.Based upon the data which is provided,folks can see that the number of graduates who chose to work in the state-owned firms has been on a rapid decline.In 1992,approximate 50% of graduates chose to work in the state-owned enterprises however,the percentage went sharply down to only 15% in 2002.Meanwhile,the number of those who enter into private firms has been on a steady rise,reaching 50% in 2002. It is no difficult to put forward some possible causes that are responsible for the phenomenon.In the first place,with the rapid development of the Chinese economy,the private corporations have become a pillar industry in China.According to a recent Internet survey,about 70% college students consider that the private companies play an increasingly significant role in the national economy.What is more,we must admit that the private firms are more flexible than the state-owned firms,consequently, graduates will enjoy more chances to get promoted.Last but not least,the fact cannot be ignored that the experience of working in private businesses may help graduates start their own enterprise some day in the future. Considering what has been discussed so far,I am inclined to think that this trend is normal.Therefore,it is not necessary for us to regard this situation with excessive anxiety.