小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；文中词汇表达不够丰富，高级词汇方面要多累积；从句使用量不足。

I have a friend and she is beautiful. She has long hair and blank eyes other she likes reading book and playing game. We have met so many years. we study in same school , we are both like TFboys , we have so many story .last day, we tolk about tv show , she like listen to music ,but i want to see a movie ,so we are angry with each other .