文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;从句使用量不足;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇。
I have a friend and she is beautiful. She has long hair and blank eyes other she likes reading book and playing game. We have met too many years. we study in same school , we are both like TFboys , we have so many story .last day, we tolk about tv show , she like listen to music ,but i want to see a movie ,so we are angry with each other .