小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；从句使用量不足；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累高级词汇。

I have a friend and she is beautiful. She has long hair and blank eyes other she likes reading book and playing game. We have met too many years. We study in a same school, we are both like TFboys , we have so many story .last day, we tolk about tv show , she like listen to music ,but i want to see a movie ,so we are angry with each other .