过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇。
I have a friend and she is beautiful. She has long hair and blank eyes other she likes reading book and playing game. We have met too many years. We study in the same school. We are both like TFboys , we have so many story .last day, we tolk about tv show , she like listen to music ,but i want to see a movie ,so we are angry with each other .