小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中从句数量过少；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；文中词汇表达较为丰富，但高级词汇比较少，单词拼写要也加强。

I have a friend and she is beautiful. She has long hair and blank eyes other she likes reading book and playing game. We have met too many years. We study in the same school. We are both like TFboys. We have a gond story ahout that last day, we tolk about tv show, she like listen to music, but i want to see a movie, so we are angry with each other.