文中从句数量过少;文中词汇使用较丰富,但高级词汇使用太少;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。
I have a friend and she is beautiful. She has long hair and blank eyes other she likes reading book and playing game. We have met too many years. We study in the same school. We are both like TFboys. We have a good story about that last day, we tolk about TV show, she likes listen to music, but i want to see a movie, so we are angry with each other.