"Seven years ago, homeowners in nearby Brookville community adopted a set of restrictions on how the community's yards should be landscaped and what colors the exteriors of homes should be painted. Since then, average property values have tripled in Brookville. In order to raise property values in Deerhaven Acres, we should adopt our own set of restrictions on landscaping and housepainting."
题目讲解:
本题要求从题目中找出主要的逻辑错误,也就是Argument题目的提纲,同时每一个逻辑错误准备一套语言套路去反驳。
七年前,附近的Brookville社区的业主实施了一系列关于该社区的庭院应如何布置以及房屋应涂何种颜色的规定。从那以后,Brookville的地产平均价格翻了三番。为使Deerhaven Acres的地产升值,我们也应该对于景观和房屋涂色实施自己的规定。
观点提示:
1.作者没有提供证据说明产地价格升三倍一定是改变外观的结果,可能是别的措施
2.没有信息表明Deerhaven Acres和Brookville是可以比较的,未必需要restrictions。
作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;请作者增加词汇量的积累,词汇拼写要认真;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
According to the article, averate property values increasing must be related to the change of the outerside of the houses. It may be related to other resons. Meanwhile, There is no evidence to show that Deerhaven Acres and Brookville have same features. And the restrictions fit for Brookville may be not good for Deerhaven.