2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；过渡词和衔接词不饱和，文章行文较为流畅；作者词汇基础挺好，能灵活使用部分高级词汇，但词汇拼写要再接再厉。

How should parents help children to be independent There is a situation becomes more and more normal rencently.Parents so love their kids that they would love to do everything they could do.Love has no wrong but it could distory the independment of the young kids.Deep love also changes the view how they treat diffculties alone. It is the time to make parents thoughts.They can't always do all the things instead of their kids,thry must let the kids go.Kids need to grow up alone ,they must be strong enough to face all the things whatever would happen in the future.As a adult,it's wrong to always treat own sons or dasughter as a little kid. Sometimes we must let it go what we loved deeply,but we must to.In that case,we can become strong enough to do what you what to do.