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The Dragon Boat Festival Dragon Boat Festival is an important Chinese traditiional festival in memmory of the famous poet Quyuan .Personally speaking,it is a marvelous festival with so many interesting and typical customs. Nowadays people celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival in different ways. For me ,one thing I will never miss is wrapping and eating zongzi ,a rice dumpling together with dates and red beans wrapped in bamboo leaves.It is quite a delicacy.Another thing is to tie the five-colored threads,decorate the house with mugwort leaves and calamus emiting special aroma which could ward off mostiquitoes and other insects.Apart from that, some people observe it by holding gragon boat game and throwing zongzi into river.Though there are still many people celebrate it in traditonal ways ,more and more people ,especially those living in big cities ,seldom celebtate it ,they would buy zongzi in the supermarket ,they would go out for a trip to relax themselves.Given the pace and pressure of modern life today ,they care little about the traditonal festival. Traditional festivals are the great wealth left by our ancester,we should spare every effort to proect it and more signifiantly ,show our own culture to the whole world .
