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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40892[网页划词已开启]
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分64.5分
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复杂句使用不错,句法规范;衔接成分偏少;文章使用了较丰富的词汇表达,高级词汇的使用也较灵活多样。

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it's wrong to get a conclusion immediately it's wrong for us try to get a conclusion when we saw and listened something happen. first, what you saw maybe isn't the whole process. you are not paticipated in the whole thing, you don't know how does it begin and what's it on going. Second, what you listened about is repeated by others, maybe they have plus their objectiv attitude about the thing, it may hide the truth. The last, everything is change. What you have seen and listen can only represent the moment it occurd. It maybe will change as time goes on. So, when you see or listen somthing, please don't try to get a conclusion immediately. Just waiting and thiking. Thinking how does it begin and go on, waiting for the result of the whole thing. Do not believe other people's repeat, try to analysis the content maybe include others' attitude and guess.

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