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It's un-wise to get a conclusion immediately It's un-wise for us try to get a conclusion when we seeand listen about something happening. First, what you see maybe isn't the whole process. You are not paticipated in the whole thing, you don't know how does it begin and what's it on going. Second, what you listen about is repeated by others, maybe they have plus their objectiv attitude about the thing, it may hide the truth. The last, everything is change. What you have seen and listened abot can only represent the moment it occurd. It will change as time goes on. So, when you see or listen about somthing, please don't try to get a conclusion immediately. Just waiting and thiking. Thinking how does it begin and go on, waiting for the result of the whole thing. Do not believe other people's repeat, try to analysis the content if including others' attitude and guess.
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