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As we all know, It is universally acknowledged that China is a famous world for its diverse cultures. There is a song "I love China" says” fifty-six constellations fifty-six flower, fifty-six brothers and sisters in a family, the fifty-six languages merged into one sentence, I love China…”. Lyrics tell us that we have 56 brothers and sisters. We have different languages and we all live in China. This is why our country has been developing rapidly in recent years. For example, cultures of Confucius play an significant role for foreigners to understanding Chinese multi-cultures. Ddifferent languages which as a bridge that express the Strong comprehensive of the national strength. The most important is that poetry which has been the interpretation of the cultural product. All in all, we should have a sense of gratitude that live in a cultural diversity. The nation's history, geography, local customs and practices, customs, way of life, literature and art, behaviors and ways of thinking and values is the greatest wealth that we have. We should spare no efforts to protect our cultural atmosphere.