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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40892
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
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使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。

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it is widely accepted that we get a conclusion just becase what we see and llisten.When I was young, my father always told me that you should figured out something you wanted to believe. In fact,we believe ourselves more times than the evidence.One day,I was punished by teacher for my bad behaviors.Someone told me that my intimate friend revealed me with my enemy. At that time, I just found them having a conversation.So in my minds, they were bounded up.I argued with my friend.She was so sad that she broke up with me.Later,I know it was not the fault of her.I felt so sorry,but it did not worked.For all, I want to say is that no matter how much you believe in your eyes or ears,you should identify it by yourself. Only when we do it ,we can decline the rates of mistakes.

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