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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71616
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。

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As we all know, It is universally acknowledged that China is a famous world for its diverse cultures. There is a song "I love China" says” fifty-six constellations fifty-six flower, fifty-six brothers and sisters in a family, the fifty-six languages merged into one sentence, I love China…”. Lyrics tell us that we have 56 brothers and sisters. We have different languages and we all live in China. This is why our country has been developing rapidly in recent years. For example, cultures of Confucius play a significant role for foreigners to understanding Chinese multi-cultures. There a bridge that different languages show Stronge comprehensive of the national strength. The most important is that poetry which has been the interpretation of the cultural product. All in all, we should have a sense of gratitude that living in a cultural diversity. The nation's history, geography, local customs and practices, customs, way of life, literature and art, behaviors and ways of thinking and values is the greatest wealth that we have. We should spare no efforts to protect our cultural atmosphere.

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