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2008年考研英语作文真题:你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南闯北

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:01浏览次数:19695
要求:
题目:你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南闯北(题目需自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay
要求
1.describe the drawing briefly
2.explain its intended meaning
3.give your comments

字数:200满分:100分


用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
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作者词汇基本功很好,但在高级词汇的积累上还要努力;从句使用量不足;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

What is depicted in this picture shows that two disabled man are running fast though teamwork although each of them has only one leg. Abviously, it is teamwork that make it possible for them to go anywhere they want. What does the drawing account for? The purpose of the cartoonist wants to show us is teamwork.With the development of society, competition is becoming extremely fierce. it is impossible for anyone to finish a challenge task by own himself. Hence, people in mounting numbers put great emphsis on the teamwork. Normuos exeplifications can demonstrate the power of teamwork. For example, a good company can make great progress in some rough missions though the teamwork. As a student ,when we has been confronted a hard work ,our teachers always divided us into different groups to work together. And then we would finished this work. To my best understanding, the ability of teamwork is essential for us to solve diverse problem in our daily life. Therefore, each one should set up the consicious of working with others. Only in this way can we achieve our dream and can our society is more harmounious to live in.

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