2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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There are many grand places in my hometown,but the most interest place was the temple, which was built to memory QUYUAN. the temple was made three parts,the first was the fore yard,you could see the stone stele after you go through the gaint.which was to intruduce quyuan.the sencond parts was the small temple ,there was a statue of quyuan.there are many people to honor hin.the last was the backyard which was a place for poeple rest. i think my friend mast be attracted by the temple.