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文中高级词汇使用较少，但单词拼写做的很棒；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。
My hometown is a beautiful village and near to the Yellow River, welcome you here, my dear friend . Please come with me , we must cross the yellow river by ship to reach my village , it's also an interesting experience as the river is not very big but there is not a bridge across it . And I will show you around to visit the interesting places . there are some mountains not high surround my village .We can climb a mountain and to see the site of great wall and a smoke tower built to defend against enemies in the old times . When you stand on the smoke tower , you can see the Yellow River like a beautiful ribbon across mountains . You will have a strong feeling that the Yellow river is like a mother to nourish the people living in this village . There are many local foods you can taste and I am sure you will like some. You would have a wonderful travel if coming here. Dear friends , I would like to say it again , welcome to our hometown!
