文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅。
From: Tomsmith@hotmail.com To: John@163.com Date: Jun.10th Dear John, I am a manager of sales department in Fox Electronic Comply. My name is Tomsmith. I will meet you on behalf of our company on Jun.20th. I inform you that the content of the negotiation is about the launch date of the new product and advertising campaign. We hope to establish a long-term friendly relationship with you.