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The most meaning of life is to spend the limit time on the most marveous things.Everyone's lifetime is limited,but the things we can do to rich it is unfinite. What things you can do to flourish it?Here are some advices may be helpful for you.Someone ever said that the spirit and the body,ta least one of them is on the way.So travling or reading maybe a good choice.The more you read, the more knowledge you will become.And travling can also benifits your life by opening the views of your eyes.Though travling you can tauch different cultures and meet variety of ours lifes.
