高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；从句使用不熟练；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

It's my favorite sport on football. I love the football by chance. I pick a football in the way to my home. Then I play the football with my friends. From then on, I love it more and more. We always train and play the football with my classmates. The David Beckham who come from England is my favorite football star. Be a professional football player is my best wish.