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As we all know,it is not smart to draw a conclusion about whatever you saw and heart.because if you want to obtain a right consequence, you should think it once more .What we heart and saw may be just a really small part of the reason behind of the performan-ce. For the other hand ,our brain is just like a machine which needs enough time to analyse the quetion and resolve it with apppropritely manners.
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