2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；文中较熟练地使用高级词汇，但词汇量仍需积累。

As we all know,it is not smart to draw a conclusion about whatever you saw and heart.because if you want to obtain a right consequence, you should think it once more . What we heart and saw may be just a really small part of the reason behind the performance. For the other hand ,the brain is just like a machine which needs enough time to analyse the question and resolve it with appropritely manners.