2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Hi，friend. We are long time no to see.I here about you will visit my hometown,holp you can enjoy the travle. It is a beautiful coastal city, in the north of China-Shanwei.There are many local seafood,it is different from you ate before,I think you will get a wonder new taste and enjoy it. Our beach is different place in a speciallyl town.When the sum will go,the last sunshine on the sea make it red,like the wine,every beautiful.the beach have a strange phenomenon,one side clam，the other side from the wind. I am looking forward to you come,please call me, I am willing to be your tourist guide.