高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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Pubei is my hometown.Ten years ago,so many trees were around my hometown that looked so beautiful. Much fish was fun to swim in the clean river.Though the buildings in my hometown were simple and the streets were not wide ,the people still loved their hometown,whatever they were poor.But now,my hometown has a big change.In there,so many tall buildings stand up,so many cars in the roads.But,the envirnment is bad because the facorys develop.Now,the trees and the fish less,we must proctest our envirnment first!