一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；请注意分段。

Busy day Every weekday is a busy day for me.At half to six in the morning,clock wake me up.Six forty,I open the induction cooker to warm the rice cereal which have been cooked yesterday.Then I go to the washroom to wash my face and brush my teeth.Sometimes maybe I will wash my hair.After that,my breakfast is OK.I eat it.About seven o'clock,I wear my cloth and leave my house. Seven fifteen I'm on the bus.Between 8 to half to nine,I should be in my office.Till half to eighteen,i could tidy my desk,then leave my office to go back to my house.