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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者应增加文中长句和从句和使用；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Recently, my mother enjoys watching a TV show named “If You Are the One”. The programs like “If You Are the One” are quite popular among people these days. Those dating shows have their advantages. It offers a platform to the singles. They can show themselves to the viewers all over the country. So there are more possibilities for them to find their Mr. Right in the whole country. Besides, participating in those shows can be an unforgettable experience. It can enrich the life to some degree.
可可英语 - 划词释义
