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GRE写作Argument模拟题 第1篇

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要求:
Task Direction:
You will have 30 minutes to plan and write a critique of an argument presented in the form of a short passage. A critique of any other argument will receive a score of zero.
Analyze the line of reasoning in the argument. Be sure to consider what, if any, questionable assumptions underlie the thinking and, if evidence is cited, how well it supports the conclusion.
You can also discuss what sort of evidence would strengthen or refute the argument, what changes in the argument would make it more logically sound, and what additional information might help you better evaluate its conclusion. Note that you are NOT being asked to present your views on the subject.
GRE® readers who are college and university faculty will read your critique and evaluate its overall quality, based on how well you
identify and analyze important features of the argument
organize, develop, and express your critique of the argument
support your critique with relevant reasons and examples
control the elements of standard written English.
Before you begin writing, you may want to take a few minutes to evaluate the argument and to plan a response. Be sure to develop your ideas fully and organize them coherently, but leave time to read what you have written and make any revisions that you think are necessary.
Section Direction:
Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument.
Question:
The following appeared in a letter sent by a committee of homeowners from the Deerhaven Acres to all homeowners in Deerhaven Acres.

"Seven years ago, homeowners in nearby Brookville community adopted a set of restrictions on how the community's yards should be landscaped and what colors the exteriors of homes should be painted. Since then, average property values have tripled in Brookville. In order to raise property values in Deerhaven Acres, we should adopt our own set of restrictions on landscaping and housepainting."

题目讲解
本题要求从题目中找出主要的逻辑错误,也就是Argument题目的提纲,同时每一个逻辑错误准备一套语言套路去反驳。
七年前,附近的Brookville社区的业主实施了一系列关于该社区的庭院应如何布置以及房屋应涂何种颜色的规定。从那以后,Brookville的地产平均价格翻了三番。为使Deerhaven Acres的地产升值,我们也应该对于景观和房屋涂色实施自己的规定。
观点提示
1.作者没有提供证据说明产地价格升三倍一定是改变外观的结果,可能是别的措施
2.没有信息表明Deerhaven Acres和Brookville是可以比较的,未必需要restrictions。

用户的作文(系统评分65.0分
评语:

如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

用户练习作文:

According to the article, The value of the estates in Brookville have been increase after they adopted the restricitons. To increase value of Deerhaven's estates, We need to adopt the same restricions. I don't agree with this argument. There are no datas show us that the increase is because the new restricitons. It may be related to other reasons,such as economic increasing... Meanwhile, Deerhaven Acres and Brookville are two different areas. We can not get any inforamtion that these two place have the same features. So it is not fit for comparing them in a simple reason.

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