2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；没有能够有效地使用连接词和过渡词；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。

As a high technology pruduct,computer helps people complete such many works.But,sunshine has its shadow.It adoubted that computer is perfect. on one hand,computer do helps people in a widely area.,such as education,medical,socity and so on.However,while computer stimulate the bloom of our socity,It also takes such a complicated sideeffect.Internet crime,the leak of personal privacy,also,including many kind of potential crisis come into people's sight in recent years.It all depend on the development of the socity. Account for the phenomenon is to put forward a solution.Each civilian has the responsibility to keep the rule of internet.Meanwhile,our goverment is suppose to do something effective in order to make the computer more useful and less harmful.