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作者词汇基础扎实；句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Human activities have negative effect on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. I do agree more with the later than the former one. Why? Yes, we have done negative effect on plants and animal species. If we don't take some method to improve the situation, that means we will continue to make thing worse. Finally we will destroy the earth. But if make some thing, such as recycle some resource, and save the energy, and food, etc. then we will make world better and better.
