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Good friend I am Nacy.I come from England.I am twelve years old.I have a good friend,she is Maria.She is from Cuba.She is twelve,too.She is tall and she has a short brown hair and blue eyes.I am short.I have a long black hair and black eyes.We don not look the same,but we are goodfriend!