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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；作者词汇基础不错，注意极个别的拼写错误。
It has been a hot topic for a long time whether internet education is need ？some people take it for granted that internet education is very necessry,however other reckon that can not use the internet to learning, Those poeple who hold the former opinion believe any learn both is useful,so,all the aducation is very need,in addition, any study has a adividual useful,combine abandent the education can make student have more knowledge, However,they are still others who advocate the latter opinion because they hold internet is very entrain,can not make student hard learn,and they think internet have a lot of information,but do not everything are useful. As for me, my favor goes to first opinion,for one thing,today,is trend to internet for world.
