2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句子错误偏多，建议修改；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，注意文中少数拼写错误；请注意分段。

success is a pretty nice thing in our life there is no doubt that all of us want accived success though not all of us can make it the original reason is the way they work as far as i am concerned the first point to success is the detail plan without a plan nothing can be done without a detail plan it will be a kidding to success in a word success derive from plan