加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;文中有几处拼写错误,应增加高级词汇的使用;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。
Dear Fred, I am glad to recieve your letter.You want to know what i like to do after my exam .Next let me tell you about it . You can not imagine how I'm glad now .I would like to sleep well because I stayed up in the past two months .Next i want to watch TV .I like paly basketball very much,so i will enjoy some basketball matchs on it .I 'm going to go to bookstore and purchase some interesting books to spend a fullfill summer vocation . How about you to spend this vocation .i' d expect to hear from you . Yours , David
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