2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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How should parents helpchildren to be indepent? Nowadays,most of parents always do everything well for their kids.On the contrary,The parents have no ways to help them independ.Here are some advice on how to make children live better: The first of all,our parents should keep free and have a test at times.