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On Excessive Packaging In recent years,when everyone buys something that they always found a lot of goods were on excessive packaging environment.In moden soceity,many manufactures want to acctractive people's eyes,they often give goods some beautiful and fashion's package.Not only goods,but also the news,the magazines,the TV shows are this.Excessive packaging were coverd many aranges. And some people maybe want to know this emphersize how to make it?I think it has these reason:First,people's demand.With the economy's development,people have some few money .They don't need the cheaper goods.Second,The social literatual's process,the soceity would become more and more perfect.Finally,manufacture's reason.Due to they want to make more money,so they must acctractive people's eyes. In a word,i don't think it'a a good emphersize.The goods should be cheap anf health.If goods always notice the package,then the goods were become unuseful.
