2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

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emerging from this picture is an thought-provoking scene that internet, today, as one part of our daily life supply convenience to us. We can do much tings via it, such as , shopping, chatting with friends, even visiting families. Although Internet have giving me massive instant, we was further with our friends and kin. Apparently, one coin have two sides. It is deeply rooted in the mind of general public that internet act important role in my life, we will not live better if we don’t have internet. but is this public view still all-round ? Cases against this opinion are abundant and with easy reach. It is not surprise to see adults visit parents via not go home but telephone or internet. It is not rare to notice that a young people stay at home for months not go out just because they have computer. Evidently, internet in the same time have bring us advantage and disadvantage. How can we put an end to the problem which internet has bring us? I deem we should adopt appositeness attitude to it. We can make the most of the merits of internet, not the disadvantage.