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2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:04浏览次数:5168
要求:
题目 网络的近与远(题目自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay
要求
1.describe the picture and interpret its meaning
2.explain its intended meaning

3.give your point of view

大体意思:

网络的近与远 一/客观描述图:很多人在上网 二/说明意思:网络的普及是拉近了人们的距离还是使人们越来越疏远?


用户的作文(系统评分86.0分
评语:

作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

A man, walking around the street, with his hand putting forwards us, is coming in the first cartoon while a girl can accompany her mother in the second caricature. The caption under the cartoon says, "we are students". Conspicuously, what the drawer intends to remind us of is not an uncommon phenomenon which has far-reaching, enlightening and valuable characteristics.Serious concern about the lack of the filial piety can we infer from the picture subtly. In the several instances, many young people abandon their old parents when they grow up. What might account for this phenomenon? A lot of possibilities may attribute to the trend. Nonetheless, there are three primary reasons deserving mention. The first is that living pressure has become more and more huge. As an example, we are students. And the second reason is relevant to ourselves, such as the absence of principle. Consequently, with the behavior, individuals' personal growth will surely be stunted, meaning that they can only obtain limited achievements rather than having become more distinguished in the world. In spite of the above mentioned, I, however, will come up with an affirmative answer with no hesitation——whatever happen is up to your mind. "Absorb the essence and discard the dregs" is the best attitude we should take. Only in this feasible way can we have a more strong, prosperous, democratic, civilized and harmonious socialist country, catering to the new development philosophy of China.

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