增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;作者能较准确地使用高级词汇,可是文中词汇表达贫乏;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。
water Water is the source of life and an indispensable substance in human life. Cherish the water is to cherish their own life. Water plays an important role in our life. The waste of water and lack of life threatening people's survival. How about the retional use of water resources, the government has taken effective measures.