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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词。
From:hubin@163.com Date: To:KPOHsales@hotmail.com During the Dec.15 to 22rid,l have kook your new product of NO.5670 has been exhibition in the New York,l am very interested in it,Please send us a price list and instruction.we are Thanks for your attention,and hopes we can establish business relationship. we are looking forward to you replay. Yours sincerely Hu Bin
