2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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How it going, .I appreciate it very much that you can visit my hometown--ChengDu .I am going to try my best arranging an excellent schedule for your days ,hoping you have nice days here . There ,of course,are a number of charming places what I want to share with you is KuanZhai street and DuFuCaoTang. Alought there are so many places worthing of visiting , I decide to choose the two for your touring,for It can be meaningful. The KuanZhai street , a place of interesting all over the world, is a historic and quiet place where you can get close to what we called old buildings and the atmosphere of quiet . when visiting , I can introduce the culture of China better without imagination . DuFuCaoTang is the famous portay 's hometown, who is known by chinese for generations . On accunt of it's repersentive , I am show you how magic it is . I do hope you can have a nice trip