2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦171:中考

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇，在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

I am interested in travelling.And I want to relax myself,so I choose the travelling as my relaxing way.I want to have a pleasant trip home first.And I like the capital of our country,Beijing, best.And there are mang places of historical interest,such as the Great Wall,Summer Palace and so on.And ,I think this will be a meaning trip for me to learn the culture of my counrty.And then I want to go toAmerica to visit you.I am looking forward to meet with you.I cannot wait to hear from you.